Re: [sdo] ISSUE 164: Updated Documents

[Bryan Aupperle <aupperle@us.ibm.com>]

One additional comment.  The section
on the SDO class (2.19) appears to be an exact duplicate of what is in
the core spec (4.15).  There is also significant duplication between
the two spec in the discussion of HelperContextFactory (2.20 and 4.16).

Bryan Aupperle, Ph.D.
STSM, WebSphere Enterprise Platform Software Solution Architect

Research Triangle Park,  NC 
+1 919-254-7508 (T/L 444-7508)
Internet Address: aupperle@us.ibm.com

From:	Bryan Aupperle/Raleigh/IBM@IBMUS
To:	"Barack, Ron" <ron.barack@sap.com>
Cc:	"sdo@lists.oasis-open.org" <sdo@lists.oasis-open.org>
Date:	10/02/2009 01:20 PM
Subject:	Re: [sdo] ISSUE 164:  Updated Documents

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I finally have had a chance to review the 2119 language for the Java spec.
 My comments: 

Bryan Aupperle, Ph.D.
STSM, WebSphere Enterprise Platform Software Solution Architect

Research Triangle Park,  NC 
+1 919-254-7508 (T/L 444-7508)
Internet Address: aupperle@us.ibm.com

From:	"Barack, Ron" <ron.barack@sap.com>
To:	"sdo@lists.oasis-open.org" <sdo@lists.oasis-open.org>
Date:	09/14/2009 11:01 AM
Subject:	[sdo] ISSUE 164:  Updated Documents

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Hi Everyone, 
  
I made a pass at the java documentation:  http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/34184/sdo-java-090825.doc
  
I also tried to merge Brians and Ulfs comments to the core spec, and to
implement some of the resolutions that we talked about in the calls.  Among
others, moving sections 6.3 and 6.4 to chapter 5.  These edits should
probably be discussed in the call, so please read chapter 5 first.  The
document is here:  http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/34185/Sdo-core-090913.doc
  
Best Regards, 
Ron 
  
  
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