[security-editors] comments on draft-sstc-core-31 &draft-sstc-bindings-model-14

[bhavna bhatnagar <bhavna.bhatnagar@Sun.COM>]

Jeff,
Not sure why I got this not authorized message. I am part of the
committee. I am resending some comments I had.

Thanks

Bhavna


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> Subject: comments on draft-sstc-core-31 & draft-sstc-bindings-model-14
> Date: Tue, 09 Apr 2002 00:48:46 -0700
> From: bhavna bhatnagar <bhavna.bhatnagar@Sun.COM>
> Organization: Sun Microsystems, Inc
> To: oasis sstc <security-services@lists.oasis-open.org>
> References: <3CB1C342.7C2FA70B@sun.com>
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> some minor comments:
> draft-sstc-core-31:
>  line 319 - need a space in  between "statementsmerely".
> line 369 and other places : I see "??" in lots of places, intentional or just something
> I am seeing.
> line 441: should be Element <AssertionIDReference>
> line 442: replace <AssertionID> with <AssertionIDReference>.
>
> draft-sstc-bindings-model-14
> line 464: probably need to replace "assertion consumer" by "artifact receiver".
> line 468: same change as on 464
> line 620: replace <AuthenticationLocality> with <SubjectLocality>
>
> Thanks
>
> Bhavna Bhatnagar