RE: [security-services] Presumptuous comments on SAML core-19 dra ft

["Hallam-Baker, Phillip" <pbaker@verisign.com>]

Ah I get it, looks like you must have left change control on then 'cos the
file size was 150Kb, hence the reason I thought something must be missing.

It looks fine to me. We need to write the concepts intro. Is there text in
some incarnation of the use cases documents we could filch?

Bringing the namespace stuff together is OK with me, note that I did that
sorta thing myself when I moved the 'extensibility' piece to a new section.

Only thing is that each of the schema sections would still need a 'preamble'
section in which the preamble to the schema is specified in order that the
schema in the text still present a complete schema in order.

Phillip Hallam-Baker FBCS C.Eng.
Principal Scientist
VeriSign Inc.
pbaker@verisign.com
781 245 6996 x227


> -----Original Message-----
> From: Eve L. Maler [mailto:eve.maler@sun.com]
> Sent: Friday, October 19, 2001 1:48 PM
> To: Hallam-Baker, Phillip
> Cc: security-services@lists.oasis-open.org
> Subject: RE: [security-services] Presumptuous comments on SAML core-19
> dra ft
> 
> 
> At 07:56 AM 10/19/01 -0700, Hallam-Baker, Phillip wrote:
> 
> >Eve,
> >
> >         Only three pages are comming out in my copy.
> >
> >                 Phill
> 
> That's all there is, so far.  The three pages include a 
> placeholder for a 
> new Section 1 on SAML Concepts, a new Section 2 that moves 
> the namespace 
> info to a place that's parallel to the core/protocol sections, and a 
> revised Section 3 intro (was Section 1 intro + Section 1.1).
> 
> I didn't continue editing because (a) I wanted to give you a 
> chance to say 
> whether you're interested in the style I used, (b) there are 
> known changes 
> in the schemas that don't correspond to the current text and 
> you probably 
> have a core-20-in-waiting, and (c) I ran out of time. :-)  
> But I'm happy to 
> do sections like this, piecemeal, if you're interested in 
> receiving them.
> 
> If you like this snippet so far, you could swap it in for the current 
> Section 1 intro + Section 1.1.  If you're already working on 
> core-20, it 
> would be great for me to get a snapshot of it so I can 
> continue in this vein.
> 
>          Eve
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>

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