RE: [security-services] EDITORIAL: Copyediting the specs

["Philpott, Robert" <rphilpott@rsasecurity.com>]

I suggested to Eve that, due to the major rewrite the specs have gone
through that I thought an additional editorial review might be useful
after she does her pass.  She likes this idea and I offered to try and
provide this additional review.  So once she completes a doc, she'll
pass it along to me and the document editor.  I'll then coordinate any
subsequent changes with those editors.

Rob Philpott
Senior Consulting Engineer 
RSA Security Inc. 
Tel: 781-515-7115 
Mobile: 617-510-0893 
Fax: 781-515-7020 
mailto:rphilpott@rsasecurity.com


-----Original Message-----
From: Eve L. Maler [mailto:Eve.Maler@Sun.COM] 
Sent: Wednesday, July 07, 2004 10:11 AM
To: 'security-services@lists.oasis-open.org'
Subject: [security-services] EDITORIAL: Copyediting the specs

Today I'm going to start doing a (long-delayed) copyediting pass on all 
the specs.  Just to let you all know how I'm going to proceed, I will 
send a note to the editors indicating which spec I'm working on.  I will

remand the result back to the editors in each case, so that they can 
decide whether the changes are substantial enough to warrant publication

by themselves (vs. continuing to make their own edits on top and then 
publishing).  While it's possible to merge changes made by multiple 
people, in my experience this can get messy when word-processing style 
changes are involved, so I'd like to avoid this if I can.

(Scott: This morning I'm starting on core-15, dated 28 Jun 2004, and the

two corresponding schema modules.  I plan to finish these by tomorrow 
noon ET.)

For the last-call working drafts, I won't be filling in the 
Acknowledgments section in the back; I will do this for the Committee 
Draft versions, however.  If anyone thinks they should be added to the 
list of editors on a spec (the criterion we've been using is whether you

physically edited the file) or the list of contributors (the criterion 
is that you contributed either some chunks of text or thorough 
comments), please let me know and I'll make this part of my cleanup.

If you have any questions, don't hesitate to let me know.  And again, 
let me put in my plea for you to review the V2.0 document deliverables 
diagram that I just uploaded, and weigh in with your comments:

http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/7601/docset-proposal-0
6.png

Thanks!

	Eve
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