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Subject: Fwd: comments: draft-sstc-saml1x-metadata-05 (should be draft-sstc-saml1x-metadata-06)

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---------- Forwarded message ----------
From: Tom Scavo <trscavo@gmail.com>
Date: Aug 1, 2006 5:42 PM
Subject: comments: draft-sstc-saml1x-metadata-05 (should be
To: oasis sstc <security-services@lists.oasis-open.org>

Document identifier: draft-sstc-saml1x-metadata-05 (should be

Previous comments are quoted below for context.  Unquoted comments
refer to the new document above.

On 6/27/06, Tom Scavo <trscavo@gmail.com> wrote:
> Document identifier: sstc-saml1x-metadata-cd-01
> [line 73] Insert non-breaking space at the end of the line.

[lines 79--80] Insert non-breaking space in this phrase "SAML V1.0".

> [line 179] s/elements'/element's/

[line 202] s/elements'/element's/ (still true despite the change in wording)

> [line 240] Change the URL to:
> http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/3405/oasis-sstc-saml-bindings-1.1.pdf
> [line 243] Change the URL to:
> http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/3406/oasis-sstc-saml-core-1.1.pdf

Can we have permanent URLs to the SAML V1.1 standards?

> [lines 245--246] Change the URL to:
> http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/18048/sstc-saml1x-metadata.xsd

Finding the schema document will be difficult without a better URL.

Some additional comments:

[line 5] s/Draft 05/Draft 06/

[line 7] s/05/06/ (in the footnote as well)

[lines 22--23] Delete the sentence "This is a Committee Draft approved
by the Security Services Technical Committee on 15 March 2005."

[table after line 71] The sentence "This is the SAML V2.0 metadata
namespace defined in the SAML V2.0 metadata specification
[SAML2Meta]." conflicts with phrases introduced in the latest versions
of other documents.

[lines 97--98] Insert non-breaking space in this phrase "SAML V2.0".

[line 182, 209, 211] s/SAML 1.x/SAML V1.x/

[lines 203--204] Insert non-breaking space in this phrase "SAML V1.x".

[line 339] Delete this line.


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