NEW Issue: Various Editorial 1

[William Cox <wtcox@CoxSoftwareArchitects.com>]

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Protocol: bqos / rating / sla /

Artifact: spec

Type: editorial

Title: Various Editorial 1

Description:

These editorial corrections are referenced to http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/32576/BusinessQualityOfService-v1.0-spec-wd04.pdf but apply to all three specifications; line numbers are in BQOS. 

(1) Change "Bill Cox" to "William Cox" wherever it occurs, under "Chairs" and line 457.

(2) Remove extra blank lines between paragraphs--the template style spaces between paragraphs. For example, after all other changes are completed remove lines 49, 59,  65, 71, 73, 76, etc.

(3) Under related work on title page delete " as a set." This is redundant.

(4) Change abstract on title page to "This document specifies the XML vocabulary for business quality of service (bQoS), one of three specifications for end-to-end resource planning (EERP). Business quality of service describes the business-related characteristics or attributes of a service."  Similar for the other two specifications.

(5) Structure documents per the current OASIS specification template at http://docs.oasis-open.org/templates/OASISSpecificationTemplateV3.2.dot . Some issues are the order of the start, e.g., The brief introduction is followed by 1.1 Terminology then 1.2 Normative References, and so forth. See, for example, http://docs.oasis-open.org/ebxml-msg/ebms/v3.0/profiles/200707/AS4-profile-cd-01.pdf

(6) Line 25 delete.

(7) List of participants - I'll have to check in detail.  Eliminate commas after each name.

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Proposed Resolution:

Correct as indicated.

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William Cox
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