RE: [soa-eerp] I030: Rating Various Editorial 2

["eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn" <eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn>]

SOA_EERP Business Rating spec version 1.0 Working Draft 06 (WD06)  uploaded

http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/33070/BusinessRating-v1.0-
spec-wd06.pdf

It fixed Item 1 to item 7 of the issue.  

It is proposed to close the issue with above changes. 


Szu Chang
Original Message:
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From: eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn
Date: Sun, 21 Jun 2009 00:40:26 -0400
To: wtcox@coxsoftwarearchitects.com, soa-eerp@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [soa-eerp] I030: Rating Various Editorial 2


Issue # I030 

For Rating Spec only. 

Relate issue are: I027, I029 and I031. 

Original Message:
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From: William Cox wtcox@CoxSoftwareArchitects.com
Date: Sat, 20 Jun 2009 21:06:48 -0400
To: soa-eerp@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [soa-eerp] NEW Issue: Various Editorial 2


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Protocol: bqos / rating / sla / others

Artifact: spec

Type: editorial

Title: Various Editorial 2

Description:

These editorial corrections are referenced to 
http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/32576/BusinessQualityOfSer
vice-v1.0-spec-wd04.pdf  
but apply to all three specifications; line numbers are in BQOS. 

(1) First two lines of Status on title page should be deleted.

(2) Rewrite Introduction. Suggested text:
"This documnent is the specification for Business Quality of Service for 
End-to-End Resource planning, an XML vocabuly by which a business 
application may communicate selected characteristics of the service it 
provides."  The suggested text applies to BQOS; similar text will be 
suggested in other issues for the rating and sla.

(3) A longer introduction describing EERP in general, and relating the 
three specifications, would be desirable in all three documents.

(4) Delete "All text is normative unless otherwise indicated." This is 
in square brackets in the specification template at 
http://docs.oasis-open.org/templates/OASISSpecificationTemplateV3.2.dot 
and should not appear in the final document.

(5) Section 1.1, namespaces, should be after Non-Normative references at 
the start of Section 2.

(6) In BQOS line 66-67 change "standard" to "specification" and change 
"model, and bQoS should" to "model. bQoS should".

(7) Generally for section headings in all of the specification (see in 
BQOS lines 150, 205, 311)  make the section heading the same as the 
element type, e.g. line 150 in BQOS should read "BQoSPrice" with no spaces.

Related issues:
Number not assigned: Various Editorial 1

Proposed Resolution:

Correct as indicated.


bill cox
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