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Subject: Re: [soa-eerp] I026: BQoS: Various Editorial 1
New working Draft WD06 uploaded at http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/document.php?document_id=33226 and it fixed the template problem. This issue changed from pending close to Closed. Original Message: ----------------- From: William Cox wtcox@CoxSoftwareArchitects.com Date: Wed, 24 Jun 2009 17:01:10 -0400 To: eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn, soa-eerp@lists.oasis-open.org Subject: Re: [soa-eerp] I026: BQoS: Various Editorial 1 This is OK, except that item 5 must be corrected. For a public review one criterion is that the document follow the CURRENT OASIS Template. The examples cited are older, and besides we need to follow the current template. Proposal: Meet the OASIS Specification Template as raised in sub-issue 5. bill -- *William Cox* Email: wtcox@CoxSoftwareArchitects.com <mailto:wtcox@CoxSoftwareArchitects.com> Web: http://www.CoxSoftwareArchitects.com +1 862 485 3696 mobile +1 908 277 3460 fax eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn wrote: > SOA-EERP BusinessQualityOfService-v1.0-spec-WD05 is uploaded at > http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/33062/BusinessQualityOfSer > vice-v1.0-spec-wd05.doc > > It fixed Item 1 to item 7 of issue with exception of item #5 only change > partially. > > Reasons: Many OASIS standards do not follow the template completely. See, > for example, > http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/ws-securitypolicy/v1.2/ws-securitypolicy.pd > f and > http://docs.oasis-open.org/wsrm/ws-reliability/v1.1/wsrm-ws_reliability-1.1- > spec-os.pdf > > It is proposed to close the issue with above changes. > > > Szu Chang > > Original Message: > ----------------- > From: eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn > Date: Sun, 21 Jun 2009 00:29:44 -0400 > To: wtcox@coxsoftwarearchitects.com, soa-eerp@lists.oasis-open.org > Subject: [soa-eerp] I026: BQoS: Various Editorial 1 > > > Issue # I026 > > For BQoS Spec only. > > Original Message: > ----------------- > From: William Cox wtcox@CoxSoftwareArchitects.com > Date: Sat, 20 Jun 2009 20:52:17 -0400 > To: soa-eerp@lists.oasis-open.org > Subject: [soa-eerp] NEW Issue: Various Editorial 1 > > > PLEASE DO NOT REPLY TO THIS EMAIL OR START A DISCUSSION THREAD UNTIL THE > ISSUE IS ASSIGNED A NUMBER. > > The issues coordinators will notify the list when that has occurred. > > Protocol: bqos / rating / sla / > > Artifact: spec > > Type: editorial > > Title: Various Editorial 1 > > Description: > > These editorial corrections are referenced to > http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/32576/BusinessQualityOfSer > vice-v1.0-spec-wd04.pdf > but apply to all three specifications; line numbers are in BQOS. > > (1) Change "Bill Cox" to "William Cox" wherever it occurs, under > "Chairs" and line 457. > > (2) Remove extra blank lines between paragraphs--the template style > spaces between paragraphs. For example, after all other changes are > completed remove lines 49, 59, 65, 71, 73, 76, etc. > > (3) Under related work on title page delete " as a set." This is redundant. > > (4) Change abstract on title page to "This document specifies the XML > vocabulary for business quality of service (bQoS), one of three > specifications for end-to-end resource planning (EERP). Business quality > of service describes the business-related characteristics or attributes > of a service." Similar for the other two specifications. > > (5) Structure documents per the current OASIS specification template at > http://docs.oasis-open.org/templates/OASISSpecificationTemplateV3.2.dot > . Some issues are the order of the start, e.g., The brief introduction > is followed by 1.1 Terminology then 1.2 Normative References, and so > forth. See, for example, > http://docs.oasis-open.org/ebxml-msg/ebms/v3.0/profiles/200707/AS4-profile-c > d-01.pdf > > (6) Line 25 delete. > > (7) List of participants - I'll have to check in detail. Eliminate > commas after each name. > > Related issues: > > Proposed Resolution: > > Correct as indicated. > > -------------------------------------------------------------------- mail2web.com – Enhanced email for the mobile individual based on Microsoft® Exchange - http://link.mail2web.com/Personal/EnhancedEmail
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