[OASIS Issue Tracker] Issue Comment Edited: (SOAEERP-22) PR07-T1Terminology Inconsistency

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Paul Yang  edited comment on SOAEERP-22 at 5/24/10 11:37 PM:
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Proposed changes from Sze:

>> Changes on the following:
>> White paper: page 5, first and second section

http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/soa-eerp/download.php/37833/EERP-Model-UseCase-WhitePaper-cd03-diff-wd08withLineNumber.pdf
 - line 91 - 100
 - line 91, missing a modifier "the" before "OASIS Reference Model"
 - line 99 - 100, "...applies the well-known technique, such as... , for service discovery and optimization techniques in a novel way" is confusing and needs rewrite.


>> BQoS spec: Line 5-11

http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/soa-eerp/download.php/37750/SOA-EERP-bQoS-Spec-cd03-diff-wd08.doc
  - line 5 - 13
  - line 5, missing a modifier "the" before "OASIS Reference Model"
  - line 12, "EERP applies the well-known technique for service discovery and optimization techniques in a novel way " is unclear and needs rewrite.


>> Rating spec: Line 5-10

http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/soa-eerp/download.php/37739/SOA-EERP-Rating-Spec-cd03-diff-wd08.doc
  - line 5 - 11
  - line 5, missing a modifier "the" before "OASIS Reference Model"
  - line 12, "EERP applies the well-known technique for service discovery and optimization techniques in a novel way " is unclear and needs rewrite.

>> BSLA spec: Line 6-12 

      was (Author: paulyang):
    Proposed changes from Sze:

>> Changes on the following:
>> White paper: page 5, first and second section

http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/soa-eerp/download.php/37833/EERP-Model-UseCase-WhitePaper-cd03-diff-wd08withLineNumber.pdf
 - line 91 - 100
 - line 91, missing a modifier "the" before "OASIS Reference Model"
 - line 99 - 100, "...applies the well-known technique, such as... , for service discovery and optimization techniques in a novel way" is confusing and needs rewrite.

>> BQoS spec: Line 5-11
>> Rating spec: Line 5-10
>> BSLA spec: Line 6-12 
  
> PR07-T1 Terminology  Inconsistency
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>
>                 Key: SOAEERP-22
>                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/SOAEERP-22
>             Project: OASIS Service-Oriented Architecture End-to-End Resource Planning (SOA-EERP) TC
>          Issue Type: Sub-task
>          Components: PR Comments
>            Reporter: Paul Yang 
>            Assignee: Szu Chang 
>
> 1. The terminology appears to be inconsistent with that in the SOA Reference Model. Terminology alignment with that specification. This applies to the White Paper, and the explanatory sections of all three specification. In particular, at least the use of "Service" should be made consistent in all SOA-EERP specifications. 

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