[OASIS Issue Tracker] Issue Comment Edited: (SOAEERP-30) PR07-T9The term "third party" in the Business Rating spec is problematic

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Paul Yang  edited comment on SOAEERP-30 at 5/25/10 4:10 AM:
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Szu's repsonse:

>> Changes on the following:
>> White paper: page 8, second last section, "The rating provider is ...", and page 21 Actors of Rating Provider

http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/soa-eerp/download.php/37833/EERP-Model-UseCase-WhitePaper-cd03-diff-wd08withLineNumber.pdf
 
 - line 218 - 219, this paragraph has sentence structure issues
 Suggestion: "The Rating Provider is a party unaffiliated with either the requester or the target of the rating request.  It is a third party rating organization that keeps a reference to a particular business service and issues either a number or a classification description."


>> Rating spec: Line 108, 110, 167-170 

http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/soa-eerp/download.php/37739/SOA-EERP-Rating-Spec-cd03-diff-wd08.doc
 - line 108, 110 done
 - line 167-170
   Suggestion: "The ListOfRating element contains the list of Rating issued by a Rating Provider. Rating Provider is a party unaffiliated with either the requester or the target of the rating request.  It is a third party rating organization that keeps a reference to a particular business service and issues either a number or a classification description for rating."


      was (Author: paulyang):
    Szu's repsonse:

>> Changes on the following:
>> White paper: page 8, second last section, "The rating provider is ...", and page 21 Actors of Rating Provider

http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/soa-eerp/download.php/37833/EERP-Model-UseCase-WhitePaper-cd03-diff-wd08withLineNumber.pdf
 
 - line 218 - 219, done


>> Rating spec: Line 108, 110, 167-170 

http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/soa-eerp/download.php/37739/SOA-EERP-Rating-Spec-cd03-diff-wd08.doc
 - done


  
> PR07-T9 The term "third party" in the Business Rating spec is problematic
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>                 Key: SOAEERP-30
>                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/SOAEERP-30
>             Project: OASIS Service-Oriented Architecture End-to-End Resource Planning (SOA-EERP) TC
>          Issue Type: Sub-task
>          Components: PR Comments
>            Reporter: Paul Yang 
>            Assignee: Szu Chang 
>
> 10. The use of "third party" (e.g., in Rating lines 100) is problematic. Does the specification assert that only "third parties", which is taken to mean "parties unaffiliated with either the requester or the target of the rating request" will respond? The conformance clauses on this issue are extremely weak. This is another area where the overall architecture, in a normative form rather than a white paper, is essential to understanding. 

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