[OASIS Issue Tracker] Issue Comment Edited: (SOAEERP-32) PR07-T11The term "Credentials" is not well defined in the Rating spec.

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Paul Yang  edited comment on SOAEERP-32 at 5/26/10 5:57 AM:
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Szu's response:

>> Changes on the following:
>> White paper: Page 7, the section of "Business Rating"; and Page 16, the section of "Credentials element is ..."
 - line 165 -170, this sections has many issues
   - sentence structure problems
   - subject verb agreement problem
   - Suggestion: 
    "Business Rating defines service credibility, reliability and reputation which need to be understood for estimating the overall business quality. It has two major categories: rating and credentials.  Rating is provided by the rating provider to show the ranking a given service provider among the others.  Credentials are provided by the service provider itself to show the credibility of providing a given service."

 - line 331 - 337, this section has many issues
   - awkward sentence structure
   - grammatical error
   - subject and verb agreement
   - Suggestion: 
    "Credentials element defines the service credentials that a service provider owns or holds. Credentials, such as licenses, permissions, certifications, associations, or affiliations, are issued by organizations that regulate the service.  They are different from the credentials for authentication in the security term; they demonstrate the credibility of a given service offered by a service provider.  Each individual element in Credentials contains a single credential for the given business service.

>> Rating spec: Line 309-312 
   - sentence structure issues
   - Suggestion: 
    "Credentials, such as licenses, permissions, certifications, awards, associations, and affiliations, are issued with respect to a service provider and its services by organizations  that regulate the service.  They are different from the credentials for authentication in the security term; they demonstrate the credibility of a given service offered by a service provider. 



      was (Author: paulyang):
    Szu's response:

>> Changes on the following:
>> White paper: Page 7, the section of "Business Rating"; and Page 16, the section of "Credentials element is ..."
 - line 165 -170, this sections has many issues
   - sentence structure problems
   - subject verb agreement problem
   - Suggestion: 
    "Business Rating defines service credibility, reliability and reputation which need to be
understood for estimating the overall business quality. It has two major categories: rating and credentials.  Rating is provided by the rating provider to show the ranking a given service provider among the others.  Credentials are provided by the service provider itself to show the credibility of providing a given service."

 - line 331 - 337, this section has many issues
   - awkward sentence structure
   - grammatical error
   - subject and verb agreement
   - Suggestion: 
    "Credentials element defines the service credentials that a service provider owns or holds. Credentials, such as licenses, permissions, certifications, associations, or affiliations, are issued by organizations that regulate the service.  They are different from the credentials for authentication in the security term; they demonstrate the credibility of a given service offered by a service provider.  Each individual element in Credentials contains a single credential for the given business service.

>> Rating spec: Line 309-312 
   - sentence structure issues
   - Suggestion: 
    "Credentials, such as licenses, permissions, certifications, awards, associations, and affiliations, are issued with respect to a service provider and its services by organizations  that regulate the service.  They are different from the credentials for authentication in the security term; they demonstrate the credibility of a given service offered by a service provider. 


  
> PR07-T11 The term "Credentials" is not well defined in the Rating spec.
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>                 Key: SOAEERP-32
>                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/SOAEERP-32
>             Project: OASIS Service-Oriented Architecture End-to-End Resource Planning (SOA-EERP) TC
>          Issue Type: Sub-task
>          Components: PR Comments
>            Reporter: Paul Yang 
>            Assignee: Szu Chang 
>
> 12. In Rating, not enough is done to connect "Credentials" to the common uses of the term, including in security and business. This is essential. 

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