[Date Prev] | [Thread Prev] | [Thread Next] | [Date Next] -- [Date Index] | [Thread Index] | [List Home]
Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (SOAEERP-14) PR08-E6SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification.pdf
[ http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/SOAEERP-14?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:comment-tabpanel&focusedCommentId=19364#action_19364 ]
Paul Yang commented on SOAEERP-14:
-----------------------------------
As per June 2nd/3rd TC meeting:
Szu is to make following corrections on the document:
- line 93-93, editing error, "the is defined", please remove "the" to change
- fix "Service Provider fulfill", either Providers fulfill or "provider fulfills"
- there is an issue of consistence of fonts used, changes need to be made in the entire document
- Change all "elements/parameters" to "elements"
- /rt:BRaing/Performance/QualityAssestionEvaluation, "Assestion" is not word.
- 5.1 Service Rating with an Engineering Service change to 5.1Service Rating for an Engineering Service
- Style problems - text, t char in some places, Normal in others, should be "Body Text" or "Text Body". Violates template.
> PR08-E6 SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification.pdf
> ------------------------------------------
>
> Key: SOAEERP-14
> URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/SOAEERP-14
> Project: OASIS Service-Oriented Architecture End-to-End Resource Planning (SOA-EERP) TC
> Issue Type: Sub-task
> Components: PR Comments
> Reporter: Paul Yang
> Assignee: Szu Chang
>
> * Line 3: Suggestion "... information exchange on business
> *credibility *reliability and reputation..."
> * Line 8: Suggestiion "The *credibility*, reliability and reputation..."
> * Line 85: Suggestion: "_*The XML vocabulary for Business Rating is
> defined in the XML Schema for this specification with several
> specific rating measurement indicators.*_"
> * Lines 111-113 are formatted in a different typeface/font from the
> style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind
> of body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
> * Lines 111-113: grammatical error (111, 112) and suggestion (112):
> "Performance:QualityAssestionEvaluation that will _*provide*_ a
> mechanism for Service Rating Entities to _*render*_ their
> evaluation for how well the Service Provider _*fulfills*_ the
> Quality Assertion(s) of its service."
> * Line 131: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
> cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Line 137, 138: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
> cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 145, 146: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Line 149: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized elements MAY cause
> a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Line 157: remove white space in element name: An aggregated
> number, in _*<rt:RatingNumeric>*_ element."
> * Line 187: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
> cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 202, 203: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 212, 213: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 218, 219: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 226-228 re formatted in a different typeface/font from the
> style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind
> of body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
> * Lines 227, 228: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 234-235: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
> cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Line 284: Suggestion: "_*Unlike *_the Rating element..."
> * Lines 320, 321: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 337, 338: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 341, 342: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 351, 352: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 361, 362: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 369, 370: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 376, 377: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 383, 384: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 390, 391: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 393, 394: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_.
> * Lines 453, 454 are formatted in a different typeface/font from the
> style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind
> of body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
> * Lines 458-460 are formatted in a different typeface/font from the
> style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind
> of body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
> * Lines 579-582 are formatted in a different typeface/font from the
> style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind
> of body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
> * Line 609-611: grammatical errors, suggestion: "...implementation
> silently _*ignores*_ unrecognized attributes where any attribute
> is allowed, or silently _*ignores *_unrecognized elements where
> any element is allowed, should be considered _*an*_ interoperable
> implementation."
--
This message is automatically generated by JIRA.
-
If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/secure/Administrators.jspa
-
For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
[Date Prev] | [Thread Prev] | [Thread Next] | [Date Next] -- [Date Index] | [Thread Index] | [List Home]