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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (SOAEERP-15) PR08-E7SOA-EERP-BSLA-spec-cd03.pdf
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Szu Chang commented on SOAEERP-15:
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All fixes in WD09 as well, see http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/38432/SOA-EERP-bSLA-spec-wd09-diff-cd03.pdf
The issue can be closed.
> PR08-E7 SOA-EERP-BSLA-spec-cd03.pdf
> ------------------------------------
>
> Key: SOAEERP-15
> URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/SOAEERP-15
> Project: OASIS Service-Oriented Architecture End-to-End Resource Planning (SOA-EERP) TC
> Issue Type: Sub-task
> Components: PR Comments
> Reporter: Paul Yang
> Assignee: Szu Chang
>
> * Lines 10, 11: grammatical error: "...to select _*an*_ optimal
> end-to-end solution."
> * Lines 134, 135: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 149, 150: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 156, 157: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 160, 161: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 200, 201: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 216, 217: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Line 220: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
> cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 262, 263: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 265, 267, 269, 271, 273, 275: Suggestion: "_*Describes*_
> available operations..."
> * Lines 281, 282: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Line 285: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
> cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 320, 321: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 328, 326: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Line 332: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
> cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 352, 353: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 360, 361: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 387, 388: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 394, 395: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 401, 402: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 408, 409: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Line 412 is formatted in a different typeface/font from the style
> used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind of
> body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
> * Note the use of a different typeface for the name of elements
> immediately after a Numbered Section Title in the following
> example does not sufficiently emphasize the name and causes visual
> dissonance, and some text passages continue using that different
> typeface so, IF this is an artifact of the OASIS specification
> template it would be a good idea to point it out, or else use
> italic or bold for emphasis because a different typeface that is
> not significantly different just looks like an unintentional error.
> * Lines 502, 503: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 583, 584: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 599, 600: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 628, 629: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 635, 636: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
> MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_."
> * Lines 776-778 are formatted in a different typeface/font from the
> style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind
> of body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
> * Line 806-808: grammatical errors: "...implementation silently
> _*ignores*_ unrecognized attributes where any attribute is
> allowed, or silently _*ignores*_ unrecognized elements where any
> element is allowed, should be considered _*an*_ interoperable
> implementation."
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