[OASIS Issue Tracker] Commented: (SOAEERP-11) PR08-E3WhitePaper-cd03 Section: *Conceptual Framework and Message Flow*

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Szu Chang  commented on SOAEERP-11:
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All  problems on figures number and its captions in Whitepaper have been fixed on WD09, see http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/38426/EERP-Model-UseCase-WhitePaper-wd09-diff-cd03-withLineNumber.pdf  

Line 234, 257, 261, 325, etc. 

> PR08-E3 WhitePaper-cd03 Section: *Conceptual Framework and Message Flow* 
> -------------------------------------------------------------------------
>
>                 Key: SOAEERP-11
>                 URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/SOAEERP-11
>             Project: OASIS Service-Oriented Architecture End-to-End Resource Planning (SOA-EERP) TC
>          Issue Type: Sub-task
>          Components: PR Comments
>            Reporter: Paul Yang 
>            Assignee: Szu Chang 
>
>     * First and second sentences in Paragraph three of SubSection:
>       "Service providers *offer* business services. Each service
>       provider may *offer* the same service but with different bQoS and
>       Ratings." "provider(s) provide" is just a bit clumsy--stylistic
>       consideration only. 
>     * /Description/ column entries for numbers 5 through 12 of the
>       Tabular presentation of messages in SubSection: *Message Exchange
>       Example:* are in a larger text size than the rest of the tabular
>       material.
>     * /Description/ for number 8 in tabular presentation of messages in
>       SubSection: Message Exchange Example needs correction : ...*SLA*
>       Request message...
>     * /Description/ for number 11 in tabular presentation of messages in
>       SubSection: *Message Exchange Example*: doesn't make sense to me:
>       "Service Requester sends SLA Request message to the Service
>       Providers to obtain the commitments from the Service Providers
>       _*f**or those no SLA service in the set*_".
>     * Suggestion: in last paragraph on page 10 SubSection: Message
>       Exchange Example: "We conclude this section with a _*sequence*_
>       diagram." 

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