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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Updated: (SOAEERP-10) PR08-E2 WhitePaper-cd03 Section: *EERP Technology*
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William Cox updated SOAEERP-10:
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Fix Version/s: cd04
Affects Version/s: cd03
> PR08-E2 WhitePaper-cd03 Section: *EERP Technology*
> ----------------------------------------------------
>
> Key: SOAEERP-10
> URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/SOAEERP-10
> Project: OASIS Service-Oriented Architecture End-to-End Resource Planning (SOA-EERP) TC
> Issue Type: Sub-task
> Components: PR01 Comments
> Affects Versions: cd03
> Reporter: Paul Yang
> Assignee: Szu Chang
> Fix For: cd04
>
>
> * I would like to commend you on the explanation given in
> SubSection: *Enablers for Optimization:*
> * Specifically, I am very pleased that "The focus of the SOA-EERP
> Technical Committee is on enablers for optimization and process
> improvement rather than on the complete EERP environment." This
> was an unspoken concern of mine early on, and it puts the entire
> complement of specifications into a sound perspective. (Note: I
> didn't intend to start with agreement and commendation. I must be
> slipping!")
> * In the second paragraph of SubSection: *Enablers for Optimization:
> *the parenthetical phrase "(how to represent cost, time, and
> cost)," is clumsy. Perhaps "(how to represent cost, time, and
> intended result)," might be better. (Note: the term we use in the
> SOA-RAF for intended "result" would be intended "Real World Effect.")
> * Suggestion for next to last paragraph of SubSection: *Status of
> Standards Process:* "These XML vocabulary specifications address
> the exchange of information that models the business
> characteristics of a service, permits assertions or queries
> related to the credibility of the service and its provider, and
> the establishment of agreements about the _*use of*_ business service.
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