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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Updated: (SOAEERP-12) PR08-E4 Section:WhitePaper-cd03 Section:*A Guided Tour through the XML VocabularySpecifications*
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William Cox updated SOAEERP-12:
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Fix Version/s: cd04
Affects Version/s: cd03
> PR08-E4 Section: WhitePaper-cd03 Section:*A Guided Tour through the XML Vocabulary Specifications*
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>
> Key: SOAEERP-12
> URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/SOAEERP-12
> Project: OASIS Service-Oriented Architecture End-to-End Resource Planning (SOA-EERP) TC
> Issue Type: Sub-task
> Components: PR01 Comments
> Affects Versions: cd03
> Reporter: Paul Yang
> Assignee: Szu Chang
> Fix For: cd04
>
>
> * Suggestion: in SubSection: *The Three Specifications:* in third
> paragraph: "EERP Business Rating of Services Specification is an
> XML vocabulary for information exchange on business
> _*credibility*_, reliability and reputation of the service
> providers. The _*credibility*_, reliability and reputation..."
> * Suggestion: in SubSection: *The Three Specifications:* in
> paragraph four "...and to select _*an*_ optimal end-to-end solution."
> * Suggestion: in SubSection: *The Three Specifications:* in
> paragraph five "...EERP Business Service Level Agreement for
> *(BSLA)*" should reflect the resolution of the *General Comment*
> above. Also the words "and evaluate" are in a different font for
> no apparent reason, so should be changed to match the style of the
> rest of the paragraph.
> * Suggestion: in SubSection: *The Three Specifications:* in
> paragraph six: *BSLA* occurs again, please follow resolution of
> *General Comment *above.
> * Suggestion: in SubSection: *EERP Business Quality of Service
> (bQoS) Specification and Schema:* BQoS occurs several times and
> should be consistent with resolution of *General Comment *above.
> * Page 15 in first paragraph of Section: *EERP Business Service
> Level Agreement Specification:* 2nd line: "... service provider
> for a give service." should be "...service provider for a
> _*given*_ service."
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