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Subject: [OASIS Issue Tracker] Updated: (SOAEERP-15) PR08-E7SOA-EERP-BSLA-spec-cd03.pdf
[ http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/SOAEERP-15?page=com.atlassian.jira.plugin.system.issuetabpanels:all-tabpanel ] Szu Chang updated SOAEERP-15: ------------------------------ Proposal: Fixed all those minor editorial problems on WD09 of the bSLA spec, see http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/38432/SOA-EERP-bSLA-spec-wd09-diff-cd03.pdf The issue can be closed. > PR08-E7 SOA-EERP-BSLA-spec-cd03.pdf > ------------------------------------ > > Key: SOAEERP-15 > URL: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/SOAEERP-15 > Project: OASIS Service-Oriented Architecture End-to-End Resource Planning (SOA-EERP) TC > Issue Type: Sub-task > Components: PR01 Comments > Affects Versions: cd03 > Reporter: Paul Yang > Assignee: Szu Chang > Fix For: cd04 > > > * Lines 10, 11: grammatical error: "...to select _*an*_ optimal > end-to-end solution." > * Lines 134, 135: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 149, 150: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 156, 157: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 160, 161: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 200, 201: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 216, 217: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Line 220: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY > cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 262, 263: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 265, 267, 269, 271, 273, 275: Suggestion: "_*Describes*_ > available operations..." > * Lines 281, 282: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Line 285: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY > cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 320, 321: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 328, 326: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Line 332: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY > cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 352, 353: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 360, 361: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 387, 388: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 394, 395: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 401, 402: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 408, 409: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Line 412 is formatted in a different typeface/font from the style > used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind of > body text and should be changed to match the overall style. > * Note the use of a different typeface for the name of elements > immediately after a Numbered Section Title in the following > example does not sufficiently emphasize the name and causes visual > dissonance, and some text passages continue using that different > typeface so, IF this is an artifact of the OASIS specification > template it would be a good idea to point it out, or else use > italic or bold for emphasis because a different typeface that is > not significantly different just looks like an unintentional error. > * Lines 502, 503: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 583, 584: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 599, 600: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 628, 629: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 635, 636: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes > MAY cause a fault or be silently _*ignored*_." > * Lines 776-778 are formatted in a different typeface/font from the > style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind > of body text and should be changed to match the overall style. > * Line 806-808: grammatical errors: "...implementation silently > _*ignores*_ unrecognized attributes where any attribute is > allowed, or silently _*ignores*_ unrecognized elements where any > element is allowed, should be considered _*an*_ interoperable > implementation." -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - If you think it was sent incorrectly contact one of the administrators: http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/secure/Administrators.jspa - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira
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