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Subject: RE: [soa-eerp] Changes required to submitted document - SOA-EERP Business Rating ofService Version 1.0
Kim, All required changes for SOA-EERP bRating spec are fixed, and new version of specs are uploaded onto TC repository @ http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/soa-eerp/documents.php . The whole submission package is uploaded onto http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/39775/SOA-EERP-PR02-submis sion-package.zip. Please let me know if there are any problems on this new submission package. Regards, Szu Chang Original Message: ----------------- From: Kim Goolsby kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org Date: Tue, 12 Oct 2010 12:49:30 -0400 To: soa-eerp@lists.oasis-open.org, mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org Subject: [soa-eerp] Changes required to submitted document - SOA-EERP Business Rating ofService Version 1.0 *TCADMIN-254 <http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/TCADMIN-253>* * * * <http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/TCADMIN-253>**Hi all, My comments below contain required changes plus suggestions. The suggestions are just that, suggestions only. Please make the following changes to this document: * * * * <http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/TCADMIN-253>** 1. In 'This Version', the underlying URIs are incorrect. Please change from http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Spec-wd09.xxx to http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Spec-cd04.xxx. That is, change /wd09/ to /cd04/. 2. In 'Latest Version', please change the text & underlying URIs from <http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Specification.xx x> http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bRating-Specification.< http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bRating-Specification.h tml%0D> xxx<http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Specificatio n.xxx> to <http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Specification.xx x> http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification.<h ttp://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification.htm l> xxx. 3. In the 'Technical Committee' section, please change text from bold to regular weight. 4. In 'Related Work', the first bullet contains a broken link. Please change from http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bRating-Specification.p df to http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification.pd f, removing the errant 'b' from 'bRating'. Note that this was correct in the previous version. 5. In 'Normative References', I suggest adding the date to [UBL-20-cbc]. The date is October 2006. 6. Also, in 'Normative References', I suggest adding the date to [UBL-20-udt]. The date is February 2005. 7. Please generate an html version of this document in addition to word & pdf versions. Please contact me with any questions or comments. Best regards, Kim * -- Kim Goolsby Publications Specialist OASIS Open: Advancing open standards for the information society email: kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org web: www.oasis-open.org phone: 1.734.223.6890 -------------------------------------------------------------------- mail2web.com - Microsoft® Exchange solutions from a leading provider - http://link.mail2web.com/Business/Exchange
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