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Subject: Re: [soa-eerp] Changes required to submitted document -SOA-EERPBusiness Quality of Service Version 1.0
Kim, The problem on title page of the html file has been fixed. The whole submission package is uploaded onto http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/39830/SOA-EERP-PR02-submis sion-package.zip Regards, Szu Chang 源郵件: ----------------- 發件人: Kim Goolsby kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org 日期: Thu, 14 Oct 2010 15:51:57 -0400 收件者: eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn, wtcox@coxsoftwarearchitects.com, soa-eerp@lists.oasis-open.org, mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org 主題: Re: [soa-eerp] Changes required to submitted document -SOA-EERPBusiness Quality of Service Version 1.0 Szu, Thanks for making these changes. Just one issue remains. In the bQoS spec, the html file has a formatting issue on the title page (in 'This Version' & 'Previous Version'). The doc & pdf URIs run together. Please regenerate that file with each URI on a separate line & resubmit. The other two specs (bSLA & BRating) have no remaining issues. Best, Kim On Thu, Oct 14, 2010 at 2:11 PM, eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn < eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn> wrote: > Kim, > > All required changes are fixed for SOA-EERP bQoS specs, and new version of > specs are uploaded onto TC repository @ > http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/soa-eerp/documents.php . The > whole submission package is uploaded onto > > http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/39775/SOA-EERP-PR02-submis > sion-package.zip<http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/39775/SOA -EERP-PR02-submission-package.zip> > . > > Please let me know if there are any problems on this new submission > package. > > Regards, > > > > Szu Chang > > > Original Message: > ----------------- > From: Kim Goolsby kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org > Date: Tue, 12 Oct 2010 12:36:46 -0400 > To: wtcox@coxsoftwarearchitects.com, soa-eerp@lists.oasis-open.org, > mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org > Subject: Re: [soa-eerp] Changes required to submitted document - > SOA-EERPBusiness Quality of Service Version 1.0 > > > If this works for Mary, I'll change my suggestion for CEFACT to your > preferred link: > http://www.unece.org/cefact/recommendations/rec09/rec09_ecetrd203.pdf > > <http://www.unece.org/cefact/recommendations/rec09/rec09_ecetrd203.pdf > >Thank > you. > > On Tue, Oct 12, 2010 at 11:48 AM, William Cox < > wtcox@coxsoftwarearchitects.com> wrote: > > > regarding currency codes: > > > > CEFACT now says use a normative reference to ISO 4217, which contains the > > currency and country codes. > > > > Reference should be to ISO 4217, per CEFACT. The code list > Recommendation > > 9 is at > > http://www.unece.org/cefact/recommendations/rec09/rec09_ecetrd203.pdf > > > > Here's a note from a draft NAESB Standard in process: > > > > The ISO 4217 code indicating the currency applicable to the bill amounts > in > > the summary. See list at > > http://www.unece.org/cefact/recommendations/rec09/rec09_ecetrd203.pdf > > > > From page 96 of the CEFACT recommendation in Kim's email ( > > http://www.unece.org/cefact/ebxml/CCTS_V2-01_Final.pdf ) which is Core > > Components rather than Currency Codes: > > > > Currency. > > Identifier > > Reference UN/ECE Rec. 9, using 3-letter > > alphabetic codes. The UN/ECE Rec. 9 is also > > published as ISO 4217, but is available in > > electronic form and free of charge. > > > > So if all that's referenced are currency codes, either ISO 4217 or Rec. 9 > > works, and I'd prefer the ISO 4217 reference of the two. > > > > Thanks! > > > > bill > > -- > > *William Cox* > > Email: wtcox@CoxSoftwareArchitects.com > > Web: http://www.CoxSoftwareArchitects.com > > +1 862 485 3696 mobile > > +1 908 277 3460 fax > > > > On 10/12/10 10:21 AM, Kim Goolsby wrote: > > > > *TCADMIN-252 <http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/TCADMIN-252>* > > * > > * > > *Hi all, > > > > My comments below contain required changes plus suggestions. The > > suggestions are just that, suggestions only. > > > > Please make the following changes to this document: > > > > 1. In 'This Version', please update the underlying URIs to the current > > version. Change from > > > http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/bqos/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bQoS-Spec-wd09.xxxto > > > http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/bqos/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bQoS-Spec-cd04.xxx. > > That is, change /wd09/ to /cd04/. > > > > 2. In the footer, please correct the spelling of September. > > > > 3. In the 'Technical Committee' section, please change text from bold to > > regular weight. > > > > 4. In 'Related Work', the first bullet contains a broken link. Please > > change from > > > > http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bRating-Specification.p > dfto > > > > http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification.pd > f<http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification. pdf> > , > > removing the errant 'b' from 'bRating'. > > Note that this was correct in the previous version. > > > > 5. In 'Normative References', please activate the link for [UBL-20]. > Note > > that this was correct in the previous version. > > > > 6. Also, in 'Normative References', I suggest adding the date to > > [UBL-20-cbc]. The date is October 2006. > > > > 7. Also, in 'Normative References', I suggest adding the date to > > [UBL-20-udt]. The date is February 2005. > > > > 8. Also in 'Normative References', [CEFACT] contains an incomplete title > > and a broken link. This was also true in the last version. I suggest > > updating with correct information. According to wikipedia, the latest > > version is http://www.unece.org/cefact/ebxml/CCTS_V2-01_Final.pdf, dated > > November 2003. > > > > 9. Also in 'Normative References', for [SOA-RM], please activate the > > actual URI to the document rather than the document title. > > > > 10. Please generate an html version of this document in addition to word > > & pdf versions. > > > > Please contact me with any questions or comments. > > > > Best regards, > > Kim > > > > * > > * > > * > > > > -- > > Kim Goolsby > > Publications Specialist > > OASIS Open: Advancing open standards for the information society > > email: kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org > > web: www.oasis-open.org > > phone: 1.734.223.6890 > > > > > > > -- > Kim Goolsby > Publications Specialist > OASIS Open: Advancing open standards for the information society > email: kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org > web: www.oasis-open.org > phone: 1.734.223.6890 > > > -------------------------------------------------------------------- > mail2web.com ?What can On Demand Business Solutions do for you? > http://link.mail2web.com/Business/SharePoint > > > -- Kim Goolsby Publications Specialist OASIS Open: Advancing open standards for the information society email: kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org web: www.oasis-open.org phone: 1.734.223.6890 -------------------------------------------------------------------- mail2web – 從 web 檢查您的電子郵件,網址 http://mail2web.com/ .
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