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Subject: Re: [soa-eerp] Changes required to submitted document -SOA-EERPBusiness Rating ofService Version 1.0
Kim,
It looks good for all links, except the namespace document is not updated.
The previous submission package has some typo on the namespace document,
and the new version can be found @
http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/39844/SOA-EERP-PR02-submis
sion-package.zip.
Please use the namespace document from this zip file.
Regards,
Szu Chang
源郵件:
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發件人: Kim Goolsby kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org
日期: Fri, 15 Oct 2010 14:57:11 -0400
收件者: eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn, soa-eerp@lists.oasis-open.org,
主題: Re: [soa-eerp] Changes required to submitted document -
SOA-EERPBusiness Rating ofService Version 1.0
sion-package.zip<http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/39775/SOA
Hi all,
All specs are uploaded. Please take a look & let me know of any comments.
Thanks,
Kim
On Thu, Oct 14, 2010 at 2:08 PM, eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn <
eerp_sy@changfeng.org.cn> wrote:
> Kim,
>
> All required changes for SOA-EERP bRating spec are fixed, and new version
> of specs are uploaded onto TC repository @
> http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/soa-eerp/documents.php . The
> whole submission package is uploaded onto
>
>
http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/39775/SOA-EERP-PR02-submis
>
-EERP-PR02-submission-package.zip>
tml%0D<http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bRating-Specific> .
>
> Please let me know if there are any problems on this new submission
> package.
>
> Regards,
>
>
>
> Szu Chang
>
>
> Original Message:
> -----------------
> From: Kim Goolsby kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org
> Date: Tue, 12 Oct 2010 12:49:30 -0400
> To: soa-eerp@lists.oasis-open.org, mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org
> Subject: [soa-eerp] Changes required to submitted document - SOA-EERP
> Business Rating ofService Version 1.0
>
>
> *TCADMIN-254 <http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/TCADMIN-253>*
> *
> *
> * <http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/TCADMIN-253>**Hi all,
>
> My comments below contain required changes plus suggestions. The
> suggestions
> are just that, suggestions only.
>
> Please make the following changes to this document:
> *
> *
> *
> * <http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/TCADMIN-253>**
> 1. In 'This Version', the underlying URIs are incorrect. Please change
from
> http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Spec-wd09.xxxto
> http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Spec-cd04.xxx.
> That is, change /wd09/ to /cd04/.
>
> 2.
> In 'Latest Version', please change the text & underlying URIs from
>
> <
>
http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Specification.xx
> x>
>
> http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bRating-Specification
> .<
>
>
http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bRating-Specification.h
>
ation.html%0D>df<http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bRating-Specificatio
> >
> xxx<
> http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Specificatio
> n.xxx>
>
> to
>
> <
>
http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/sla/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bSLA-Specification.xx
> x>
> http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification
> .<h
> ttp://
> docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification.htm
> l>
> xxx.
>
> 3. In the 'Technical Committee' section, please change text from bold to
> regular weight.
>
> 4. In 'Related Work', the first bullet contains a broken link. Please
> change
> from
>
>
http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-bRating-Specification.p
>
f<http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-eerp/rt/v1.0/SOA-EERP-Rating-Specification.
pdf>
--------------------------------------------------------------------> ,
> removing the errant 'b' from 'bRating'. Note that this was correct in the
> previous version.
>
> 5. In 'Normative References', I suggest adding the date to [UBL-20-cbc].
> The
> date is October 2006.
>
> 6. Also, in 'Normative References', I suggest adding the date to
> [UBL-20-udt]. The date is February 2005.
>
> 7.
> Please generate an html version of this document in addition to word & pdf
> versions.
>
> Please contact me with any questions or comments.
>
> Best regards,
> Kim
> *
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> email: kim.goolsby@oasis-open.org
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