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Comment from: rajesh.jayaprakash@tcs.com

Name: Rajesh Jayaprakash
Title: Architect
Organization: Tata Consultancy Services
Regarding Specification: soa-rm

Section 3.2.2.1 Action model -- lines 512-523

"changing the data in a bank statement is not 
the same as changing the actual data representing 
the amount in an account".

I feel that this is a weak example and does not 
really convey the intent, i.e. that data changes 
may have different value in different contexts.

Regards,

Rajesh Jayaprakash