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Subject: Textual issues in SOA-RAF 1.0 prd 02

From: "Marco van Zwetselaar" <zwets@zwets.com>
To: soa-rm-comment@lists.oasis-open.org
Date: Wed, 31 Aug 2011 18:29:48 +0200

TC members,

My compliments on the SOA reference architecture foundation. You have
produced an insightful and comprehensive piece of work.

I spotted the following textual issues in the SOA-RAF 1.0 public review
draft 02:

Line 2908 is a misplaced figure caption.

Line 2909 seems to be the end of a missing paragraph.

Line 2912 heading should be "Authorization", not Authentication.

Line 2916 hovering popup for the diagram shows gibberish.

Best regards,
Marco