Re: [soa-rm-editors] Re: SOA-RM Section 1.2

[Duane Nickull <dnickull@adobe.com>]

+1 - thank you!!!

Matthew MacKenzie wrote:

> John,
>
> Thanks a lot for refining this text.  I will integrate it into ed 
> draft 07.  If you are so inclined, take a peek at 
> http://mattm.wikispaces.org/SOA+RM+editing+assignments and see if 
> there is anything else you would like to contribute to.
>
> Best Regards,
>
> Matt
> John Harby wrote:
>
>> Hi Matt,
>>
>>    Here is what I have for Section 1.2 of the RM. I basically just
>> used what Duane provided making a couple of style/grammar corrections
>> and additions. Please let me know if you need anything else at this
>> time.
>>
>> Thanks,
>> John Harby
>>
>

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