Re: [soa-rm-editors] editors comments to 08 draft

[Frank McCabe <frank.mccabe@us.fujitsu.com>]

Ken:
  For efficiency, and I think that this may be a matter of taste, if  
its small just let me know and I'll update the text.
  If its substantial, then it needs to go to a wider audience.
  This reminds me, it is now time for the proof-reading team to get  
to work!
Frank

On Sep 12, 2005, at 9:07 AM, Ken Laskey wrote:


> Frank - I've noticed numerous places where your comment says,  
> "Shoot me."  Shall we do this as gentlemen with pistols at dawn or  
> whisky at a more decent time in the afternoon?
>
> In all (or at least partial) seriousness, I've started going  
> through 08 and my compliments to Frank on pulling this together.   
> My question is whether the editing team should discuss questions we  
> may have in a editors-only forum and come to some agreements, or do  
> we just dump our comments in with everyone else's?  Things I have  
> so far range from is it "a SOA" or "an SOA" to "I wrote a given  
> paragraph with the intent of making this or that point and if the  
> paragraph isn't there, do we need to put the thought in  
> elsewhere".  The latter is especially difficult in a TC-wide  
> comment list because it can be things that weren't in 07 and never  
> made it to 08.
>
> Ken
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