Re: [soa-rm-editors] fodder for the interim distribution following ftf

[Ken Laskey <klaskey@mitre.org>]

Frank and I have been working the stuff I sent to the editors last week and I'm attaching it here to see whether the editors are sufficiently satisfied that we could distribute it for this week's telecon.  My thought is this is new material and it would be useful to make sure there is no major screaming before we get to 10.

Plus, it would give us something to talk about on Wednesday :-)

Ken

SOA description words-FGM-KJL.doc

On Oct 31, 2005, at 12:34 PM, Matthew MacKenzie wrote:

> I am not able to attend on Wednesday — day job.  I doubt that 10 will be ready by then.
>
>  -matt
>
>
>  On 10/31/05 12:04 PM, "Duane Nickull" <dnickull@adobe.com> wrote:
>
> > Ken et al:
> >
> >  I am preparing the agenda for Wednesday.  Are we expecting rev 10 by
> >  Wednesday?
> >
> >  Duane
> >
> >  -----Original Message-----
> >  From: Ken Laskey [mailto:klaskey@mitre.org]
> >  Sent: Tuesday, October 25, 2005 2:07 PM
> >  To: soa-rm-editors
> >  Subject: [soa-rm-editors] fodder for the interim distribution following
> >  ftf
> >
> >  I've exchanged a few emails with Rebekah and in an attempt to keep the
> >  process moving, I've taken a crack at an SOA overview section that
> >  incorporates the offer (now visibility)-interaction-effect triad and
> >  other discussion chunks from the ftf.  (Rebekah hasn't seen or agreed
> >  to everything here.)  Note, the attached adds a new Section 2 and
> >  reduces the introduction in the old Section 2 (now Section 3).  There
> >  are still some holes to be filled but I think these are best handled
> >  (at least for a first pass) by Frank and Rebekah because they have
> >  specific thoughts of things that need to be said.
> >
> >  Also attaching my capture of what was on the board last week at the
> >  ftf.  This also does not represent conclusions but just discussion.
> >
> >  Ken

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