Re: [soa-rm-editors] wd-soa-rm-10ED.pdf

[Ken Laskey <klaskey@mitre.org>]

On a quick look, one thing I noticed was we added Section 2 but also  
retained Section 3.1.  Now it really seems redundant.  I will try to  
indicate some specific edits but my initial suggestion is to remove  
Section 3.1 and promote section 3.2 to 3.  Having not read the latest,  
I'm not sure if Sections 3.3-3.6 stay with a revised Section 3 or  
become a new Section 4.

Other opinions welcome.

Ken

On Nov 1, 2005, at 7:48 AM, Matt MacKenzie wrote:

> Team:
>
> Here is the Draft 10 candidate.  If there is agreement of this team, I
> will knock off the ED and post it to the main list.
>
> Please, send in your votes. If there is a no, deliver it with at least
> one proposed change :-)
>
> -Matt
> <wd-soa-rm-10ED.pdf>

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