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Subject: Re: [soa-rm-editors] wd-soa-rm-10ED.pdf


No I don't fully agree with this. 3.1 introduced the model, section 2  
introduces SOA -- they are different.
However, 3.1 could stand some redaction...
Frank

On Nov 1, 2005, at 11:55 AM, Ken Laskey wrote:

> On a quick look, one thing I noticed was we added Section 2 but  
> also retained Section 3.1.  Now it really seems redundant.  I will  
> try to indicate some specific edits but my initial suggestion is to  
> remove Section 3.1 and promote section 3.2 to 3.  Having not read  
> the latest, I'm not sure if Sections 3.3-3.6 stay with a revised  
> Section 3 or become a new Section 4.
>
> Other opinions welcome.
>
> Ken
>
> On Nov 1, 2005, at 7:48 AM, Matt MacKenzie wrote:
>
>> Team:
>>
>> Here is the Draft 10 candidate.  If there is agreement of this  
>> team, I
>> will knock off the ED and post it to the main list.
>>
>> Please, send in your votes. If there is a no, deliver it with at  
>> least
>> one proposed change :-)
>>
>> -Matt
>> <wd-soa-rm-10ED.pdf>
>
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