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Subject: First pass
I have done a first pass at the overall edit.
I would appreciate editorial comments from the team. Some comments: 1. Glossary has not been looked at 2. Section on discoverability has been refactored into section on visibility. Please take a look. It would be good if we could publish to the main list by CoB tomorrow. Frank