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Subject: First pass

From: Frank McCabe <frank.mccabe@us.fujitsu.com>
To: soa-rm-editors <soa-rm-editors@lists.oasis-open.org>
Date: Thu, 10 Nov 2005 09:35:30 -0800

I have done a first pass at the overall edit.

wd-soa-rm-10a.pdf


I would appreciate editorial comments from the team.

Some comments:
1. Glossary has not been looked at
2. Section on discoverability has been refactored into section on  
visibility. Please take a look.

It would be good if we could publish to the main list by CoB tomorrow.

Frank