RE: [soa-rm-editors] First pass

["Duane Nickull" <dnickull@adobe.com>]

All:

Thanks for all your work.  I haven't had any epiphanies WRT graphic so suggest we publish Franks puzzle and sign up at Café press.

Have a good weekend.  (PS - no labour yet)

D

-----Original Message-----
From: Peter F Brown [mailto:peter@justbrown.net] 
Sent: Friday, November 11, 2005 2:48 PM
To: 'Francis McCabe'
Cc: soa-rm-editors@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: RE: [soa-rm-editors] First pass

Here is the first part of my "second pass" based on the feedback from the
proof-readers...I still have to work through the rest of some 20+ comments
and changes proposed by Al Brown, and I'll send these as a second take
tomorrow morning. Brain is getting addled at this late hour...Hopefully this
provides a "restore point" at least.

I've used track changes throughout to mark my changes in text, and comments
where I think there is ambiguity or an open issue still.

-----Original Message-----
From: Peter F Brown [mailto:peter@justbrown.net] 
Sent: 11 November 2005 22:08
To: 'Francis McCabe'
Cc: 'Matt MacKenzie'
Subject: RE: [soa-rm-editors] First pass

Thanks Frank, appreciated.

I'll try to keep the proof-reading edits and comments (incorporating stuff
from me, Prasanta, Al and Rebekah) as clear as possible, using track change
function, so you can spot my stuff. I'll turn this around this evening and
get it back to you an hour or so from now...

Toodlepip

Peter

-----Original Message-----
From: Francis McCabe [mailto:fgm@fla.fujitsu.com]
Sent: 11 November 2005 18:49
To: peter@justbrown.net
Subject: Re: [soa-rm-editors] First pass

Peter
  I will send you a copy of the word file. But, you must understand that I
am *also* editing it. Someone has to do the grungy work of reconciling edits
(non-trivial in the case of certain other editors).
Frank