Re: [soa-rm-editors] editor's draft

[Ken Laskey <klaskey@mitre.org>]

Frank,

Great job.  I did a quick check and here are a few things that seem  
different from the action indicated in the last issues spreadsheet.

Issue 467 (and 400): I thought the resolution was "Note, it is not  
possible to describe every effect from using a capability, and a  
cornerstone of SOA is that we can use capabilities without needing to  
know all the details."  Just having the end of the sentence loses a big  
part of the message.

Issue 470: we agreed to accept and don't know whether you missed or had  
a change of heart.

With this, we turn it over to our esteemed leadership to do whatever is  
needed to have OASIS start the review.

Ken

On Feb 1, 2006, at 4:54 PM, Frank McCabe wrote:

>
> I think (!) ! have done all the changes, including fixes to the  
> glossary.
>
> Some points:
>
> 1. I did not add names to the arcs. I removed the labels on one figure  
> for consistency. If we decide to add the labels then that will not be  
> hard to do.
>
> 2. Issue 446 Used essentially the text proposed by Ken to explain  
> figure 1
>
> 3. Issue 468 SOA is a means ... is a lead-in :)
>
> 4. bolding. I tried to follow all the issue markers for bolding first  
> occ. only. However, its is entirely possible I missed some.
>
> 5. added a new entry to glossary: reference architecture.
>
> 6. unnumbered issue re glossary entry for visibility. rejected.
>
> 7. unnumbered issue re glossary entry for framework. kept entry. Ok to  
> delete AFAIAC
>
> 8. all other glossary amendments made as suggested (with a couple of  
> v. minor tweaks)
>
> 9. action items arising from last call also completed.
>
> 10. Do not have the list of acknowledgments yet. Cannot publish  
> without it.
>
> 11. Rejected suggestion to have a 'dummy' errata page. There is  
> already a pointer to an errata page at start of document.
>
> <wd-soa-rm-cd1ED.pdf>
> Frank
>
>

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