Re: [soa-rm-ra] First pass at initial paragraphs for SOA RA Purpose

[Francis McCabe <frankmccabe@mac.com>]

I was referring more to the process of requirements capture that we  
went through. I am completely open to editing section 2.1; and making  
it snappier™.
Frank

On Jun 18, 2007, at 11:58 AM, Ken Laskey wrote:

> My overall handwritten (hopefully to be transcribed soon) comments  
> on section 2.1 are:
>
> This needs to be shorter and crisper.  it goes on too long, with  
> too many random ideas of varying granularity, and leaves the reader  
> with a muddled picture of where we're going and why.
>
> I agree that we shouldn't throw away the requirements work.   
> However, if reading our requirements doesn't nail it for me, how  
> can we expect it to clarify things for others?
>
> Ken
>
> On Jun 18, 2007, at 2:35 PM, Francis McCabe wrote:
>
>> I would like to know if what we did on requirements has been  
>> forgotten, or is being ignored in this exercise.
>> If not, then the requirements (should) pretty much spell out what  
>> our mission is in the RA
>> Frank
>>
>> On Jun 18, 2007, at 11:00 AM, Rex Brooks wrote:
>>
>>> Hi Folks,
>>>
>>> I did, at least, get started, and I have attached the initial  
>>> page. I figured I had better send this off lest I head down a  
>>> blind alley.
>>>
>>> Cheers,
>>> Rex
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>>> <SOA-RA-Purpose.doc>
>>
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