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Subject: Re: Fwd: [soa-rm-ra] Issues - Call for comments on Version 0.2


Thanks Danny.  I had missed Jeff's issues. They have now been added and 
uploaded.

Don

Danny Thornton wrote:
> Jeff's issues have not been captured in the KAVI
> issues spread sheet so I am forwarding his previous
> message with "Issues" added to the subject line and I
> am also sending the message to Don Flinn, the issues
> manager.
>
> Danny
>
> --- "Jeffrey A. Estefan"
> <jeffrey.a.estefan@jpl.nasa.gov> wrote:
>
>   
>> From: "Jeffrey A. Estefan"
>> <jeffrey.a.estefan@jpl.nasa.gov>
>> To: <soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org>
>> Date: Fri, 7 Sep 2007 11:10:19 -0700
>> Subject: [soa-rm-ra] Re: [soa-rm] [soa-rm-ra] Call
>> for comments on Version 0.2 (Second time lucky?)
>>
>> Don and Frank,
>>
>> I started making a pass through Section 4 of the
>> Reference Architecture 
>> working draft 0.2 and I realized it's still kind of
>> a mess so I gave up.  I 
>> saw a lot of draft text, particularly Section 4.2,
>> therefore, I'll wait 
>> until others have had their say and updates made,
>> then I'll put my two cents 
>> forth.  It seems the focus of discussion on the SC
>> call these days has been 
>> on the subject of Governance so once the dust
>> settles, we can return to the 
>> topic of Realizing a SOA View.
>>
>> In the meantime, I've attached an issues list that
>> addresses some editorial 
>> comments (very minor ones but important for
>> readability of the document) 
>> that target the earlier sections with the caveat
>> that I did not focus much 
>> attention on the language of Section 2 -
>> Requirements.  This is something I 
>> think we'll want to return to when we're closer to
>> wrapping up Section 5.
>>
>> Cheers...
>>
>>  - Jeff E. 
>>
>>     
>
>
>
>        
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