[Date Prev] | [Thread Prev] | [Thread Next] | [Date Next] -- [Date Index] | [Thread Index] | [List Home]
Subject: Re: Fwd: [soa-rm-ra] Issues - Call for comments on Version 0.2
Thanks Danny. I had missed Jeff's issues. They have now been added and uploaded. Don Danny Thornton wrote: > Jeff's issues have not been captured in the KAVI > issues spread sheet so I am forwarding his previous > message with "Issues" added to the subject line and I > am also sending the message to Don Flinn, the issues > manager. > > Danny > > --- "Jeffrey A. Estefan" > <jeffrey.a.estefan@jpl.nasa.gov> wrote: > > >> From: "Jeffrey A. Estefan" >> <jeffrey.a.estefan@jpl.nasa.gov> >> To: <soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org> >> Date: Fri, 7 Sep 2007 11:10:19 -0700 >> Subject: [soa-rm-ra] Re: [soa-rm] [soa-rm-ra] Call >> for comments on Version 0.2 (Second time lucky?) >> >> Don and Frank, >> >> I started making a pass through Section 4 of the >> Reference Architecture >> working draft 0.2 and I realized it's still kind of >> a mess so I gave up. I >> saw a lot of draft text, particularly Section 4.2, >> therefore, I'll wait >> until others have had their say and updates made, >> then I'll put my two cents >> forth. It seems the focus of discussion on the SC >> call these days has been >> on the subject of Governance so once the dust >> settles, we can return to the >> topic of Realizing a SOA View. >> >> In the meantime, I've attached an issues list that >> addresses some editorial >> comments (very minor ones but important for >> readability of the document) >> that target the earlier sections with the caveat >> that I did not focus much >> attention on the language of Section 2 - >> Requirements. This is something I >> think we'll want to return to when we're closer to >> wrapping up Section 5. >> >> Cheers... >> >> - Jeff E. >> >> > > > > > ____________________________________________________________________________________ > Be a better Globetrotter. Get better travel answers from someone who knows. Yahoo! Answers - Check it out. > http://answers.yahoo.com/dir/?link=list&sid=396545469 -- Don Flinn President Mansurus LLC e-mail: flinn@alum.mit.edu Tel: 781-856-7230 http://mansurus.com
[Date Prev] | [Thread Prev] | [Thread Next] | [Date Next] -- [Date Index] | [Thread Index] | [List Home]