Re: [soa-rm-ra] OG Review Document

["Jeffrey A. Estefan" <jeffrey.a.estefan@jpl.nasa.gov>]

Frank and Bob,

 

Not sure if you already sent this to Chris just yet Frank but please change the opening line that refers to "Object Group" instead of "The Open Group".  In addition, unlike OASIS and OMG, they don't generally go by shorthand such as TOG or OG except for their architecture framework (i.e., TOGAF).

 

Certainly not a show stopper, but a bit more professional if we refer to their organization by the proper name.

 

Thanks!

 

 - Jeff