Disposition of section 4.1 comments

[Ken Laskey <klaskey@mitre.org>]

see attached.


On Feb 22, 2009, at 12:57 PM, Rex Brooks wrote:

> Hi Folks,
>
> In light of the fact that Ken's recently posted excerpts represent
> potential changes to Sec. 5 and I just finished a line by line review
> of the SOA-RA PR2a.doc  up to Sec. 5 I thought I would send my
> 16-page list of questions, suggested edits and some comments now
> rather than wait (some comments I didn't carry over from the copy of
> the document I worked from).
>
> I have another specification I'm editing, and its causing headaches
> and heartburn, and I have had bad news concerning a lifelong friend,
> so I don't know when I'm going to finish the rest. I am looking at
> Ken's latest now.
>
> I decided against sending along my edited copy of the document
> itself, as just too much to deal with, but if these detailed notes
> are too cumbersome, I can send it along. When I saved it with all
> changes accepted, it still only reduced the size by two pages. I
> thought about the impact of deleting some of the subsections but I
> honestly think they are all needed up to this point. I think the
> current draft is getting quite close, and once Sec 5 is fully
> crafted, I think we'll be ready for a Public Review.
>
> As with Ken, I have constituencies that need to be using some of this
> work now, and I specifically want to use Section 3.3.2 Resources
> through Section 3.3.3 Ownership  plus Section 4.1.1 The Model for
> Service Description through 4.1.1.3 Model Elements Specific to
> Service Description. I will just have to condition my use on the fact
> that the spec is not fully baked yet.
>
> Cheers,
> Rex
> -- 
> Rex Brooks
> President, CEO
> Starbourne Communications Design
> GeoAddress: 1361-A Addison
> Berkeley, CA 94702
> Tel: 510-898-0670<PR2a-RB-EditsUpToSec5.doc><ATT00001.txt>

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