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Subject: Re: [soa-rm-ra] Fwd: [soa-rm] Public Review of Reference ArchitectureFoundation for Service Oriented Architecture Version 1.0
HI Ken, Everyone, I didn't check what we sent out last time, but I sent the following message below the horizontal rule, as explanation when I forwarded the official announcement. (I didn't want to cause more delay so I did not point out to Mary that the PR release should have the pr designation in the filename and the indication of Public Review Draft on the title page. Since getting it out was the priority and we can fix the foobars, I just let it go, but I will personally double check it before the final goes out since it needs the progression from cd-03 to pr-03 to (hopefully after approval) os (OASIS Standard). Apparently all that happened was that the last set of changes were not made. At least we have the cd designation in the filename and the title page designation of Committee Draft correct. This is not the time for showstoppers. Here's what I added to the official notification: ------------------------------------------------------------------------ To: NCOIC Services WG, NEER-IPT, I am forwarding the announcement of the Public Review that starts today of the Reference Architecture Foundation for Service Oriented Architecture (SOA-RAF) Version 1.0 from the OASIS Service Oriented Architecture Reference Model Technical Committee (SOA-RM TC). This is a 60-Day Public Review and the instructions for making comments are included in the message below. We consider it critical to get the highest level of feedback we can from the groups we consider key stakeholders, such as NCOIC. For those of you who have been using an earlier draft, it is strongly urged that you download and use the document of record from the url in the message below. We prefer that comments be as specific as possible, citing the section number(s) and line number(s) to which the comment/issue refers. This is considered a major milestone in the process of delivering the best foundation for more concrete specific SOA reference architectures based on the OASIS Reference Model for Service Oriented Architecture (SOA_RM). We consider it the logical elaboration of the SOA-RM. We are asking for feedback at this stage in order to ensure that the finished SOA-RAF will provide the most consistent, measurably usable framework from which specific reference architectures and, ultimately, wholly concrete solution architectures can be developed. With your able assistance, we aim to provide a SOA-RAF with the highest level of confidence that it will fulfill its goals and objectives effectively, efficiently, scalably and durably. Best Regards, Rex Brooks ------------------------------------------------------------------------ Cheers, Rex Ken Laskey wrote: > Congratulations! We have published PR2. > > I'll be sending an email to the soa-rm list encouraging dissemination > far and wide, but before I do this, I was looking to see what we sent > out as general review guidance when PR1 went out for review. In > particular, besides using the Excel spreadsheet internally, did we > provide the template externally too? I remember getting a few > external comments but I don't remember if we massaged those into our > format or if they came in that way. > > I've looked through my email archives and haven't found anything > particularly useful. Can anyone else find or recall anything? > > Ken > > Begin forwarded message: > >> *From: *Mary McRae <mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org >> <mailto:mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org>> >> *Date: *November 13, 2009 11:41:58 PM EST >> *To: *"members@lists.oasis-open.org >> <mailto:members@lists.oasis-open.org>" <members@lists.oasis-open.org >> <mailto:members@lists.oasis-open.org>>, >> "tc-announce@lists.oasis-open.org >> <mailto:tc-announce@lists.oasis-open.org>" >> <tc-announce@lists.oasis-open.org >> <mailto:tc-announce@lists.oasis-open.org>> >> *Cc: *"soa-rm@lists.oasis-open.org >> <mailto:soa-rm@lists.oasis-open.org>" <soa-rm@lists.oasis-open.org >> <mailto:soa-rm@lists.oasis-open.org>>, OASIS TAB <tab@lists. >> oasis-open.org> >> *Subject: **[soa-rm] Public Review of Reference Architecture >> Foundation for Service Oriented Architecture Version 1.0* >> >> To OASIS members, Public Announce Lists: >> >> The OASIS Service Oriented Architecture Reference Model TC has >> recently approved the following specification as a Committee Draft >> and approved the package for public review: >> >> Reference Architecture Foundation for Service Oriented Architecture >> Version 1.0 >> >> The public review starts today, 14 November 2009, and ends 13 January >> 2009. This is an open invitation to comment. We strongly encourage >> feedback from potential users, developers and others, whether OASIS >> members or not, for the sake of improving the interoperability and >> quality of OASIS work. We also welcome interested parties to join the >> TC as it continues to further development of its specifications. >> Please feel free to distribute this announcement within your >> organization and to other appropriate mail lists. >> >> More non-normative information about the specification and the >> technical committee may be found at the public home page of the TC at: >> http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/tc_home.php?wg_abbrev=soa-rm. >> Comments may be submitted to the TC by any person through the use of >> the OASIS TC Comment Facility which can be located via the button >> marked "Send A Comment" at the top of that page, or directly at: >> http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/comments/index.php?wg_abbrev=soa-rm. >> >> Submitted comments (for this work as well as other works of that TC) >> are publicly archived and can be viewed at: >> http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/soa-rm-comment/. All comments >> submitted to OASIS are subject to the OASIS Feedback License, which >> ensures that the feedback you provide carries the same obligations at >> least as the obligations of the TC members. >> >> The specification document and related files are available here: >> >> Editable Source: >> http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-rm/soa-ra/v1.0/soa-ra-cd-02.doc >> PDF: >> http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-rm/soa-ra/v1.0/soa-ra-cd-02.pdf >> HTML: >> http://docs.oasis-open.org/soa-rm/soa-ra/v1.0/soa-ra-cd-02.html >> >> >> This specification was previous submitted for a 60-day review on 9 >> May 2008 under the title: Reference Architecture for Service Oriented >> Architecture Version 1.0.[1] >> >> OASIS and the OASIS Service Oriented Architecture Reference Model TC >> welcome your comments. >> >> >> Mary P McRae >> Director, Standards Development and Technical Committee Administration >> OASIS: Advancing open standards for the information society >> email: mary.mcrae@oasis-open.org >> web: www.oasis-open.org >> twitter: @fiberartisan #oasisopen >> phone: 1.603.232.9090 >> >> >> [1] http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/tc-announce/200805/msg00003.html >> --------------------------------------------------------------------- >> To unsubscribe from this mail list, you must leave the OASIS TC that >> generates this mail. Follow this link to all your TCs in OASIS at: >> https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/portal/my_workgroups.php >> > > ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- > Ken Laskey > MITRE Corporation, M/S H305 phone: 703-983-7934 > 7515 Colshire Drive fax: 703-983-1379 > McLean VA 22102-7508 > > > > > -- Rex Brooks President, CEO Starbourne Communications Design GeoAddress: 1361-A Addison Berkeley, CA 94702 Tel: 510-898-0670
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