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Subject: PR2 comments through section 3.1.2.1
Attached is an issues spreadsheet with comments for sections 1, 2, and through 3.1.2.1. Several issues point to other emails on this list that have suggested rewording for the indicated sections. The spreadsheet contains specific rationale for some of the suggested changes. I will add to this when I get an opportunity to transcribe other handwritten scribbles. Ken
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