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Subject: 2 Unresolved Section 2 Issues
After reviewing issues against section two, there were the following two unresolved issues: Issue 36: Is there a refernce for Critical Success Factors and "Critical Factors Analysis? Include one. Note that you use CFA as an abbreviation, but repeated indicate abbreviations for other terms in the doc -- refs if I have time. Proposed Disposition Accept - But no agreed reference. Issue 37: The goals are very abstract; the modeling is somewhat obscure (but I liked it eventually). There are more forward reference; the definition of Critical Success Factors on Line 417 follows its first use on 377. Please pay attention to forward references--they're jarring and make the document less accessible. YOU know what they mean, the reader does not. Proposed Disposition Accept - Add a formal definition for Critical Factors Analysis at the beginning of the section.
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