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Subject: Re: [soa-rm-ra] Management Concept - Jan 29 - 11


In response to Boris' request, I have composed an additional document where fragment, which I changed outside of the Management Concept, have been presented in the full texts of related sections. 

apologies for the inconvenience caused by this continuous refining.


- Michael


-----Original Message-----
From: Lublinsky, Boris <boris.lublinsky@navteq.com>
To: mpoulin@usa.com <mpoulin@usa.com>
Sent: Sun, Jan 30, 2011 1:47 am
Subject: RE: [soa-rm-ra] Management Concept - Jan 29 - 11

Michael,
Can you please, send the full text in the normal doc format?
Its very hard to read just changes
 
From: mpoulin@usa.com [mailto:mpoulin@usa.com]
Sent: Saturday, January 29, 2011 11:46 AM
To: soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [soa-rm-ra] Management Concept - Jan 29 - 11
 
Gentlemen,
I have modified Management Concept section and offer it for your review.
The modification are based on the RAF version: Editors’ Draft, 17-01-2011 (Starting Point: Draft 04 21 Dec 2010). 


I have incorporated together my own changes, the text prepared by Dan Haston and the comments received from Boris
(In this version, one service is still considered as a  potential  resource for another service, i.e. I have not changed the definition of 'resource' in our Glossary)


All pages of the attached document are split into two parts - the original text of Editors’ Draft, 17-01-2011(left-hand side) and modified text (right-hand side). All modifications are written in blue. The line numbers in the modified text (right-hand side) should be ignored.
The texts comprise 3 parts: 
·         first part contains fragments that precede the Management Concept section but refer to management
·         second part is the Management Concept section itself ( the full text )
·         third part contains fragments that follow the Management Concept section and refer to management (mainly in Glossary)


In addition to  changes related to management, I have used (and correspondingly defined) a new term that allows us to clearly distinguish between technical/IT 'system' and 'SOA-based system' scoped enterprise-wide: I proposed and have used the term SOA-based solution. The term 'solution' carries a connotation of combination of technical and manual/human/business means.
I hope to discuss attached document in the next Telcon if agenda permits.


Regards,
- Michael















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