I kinda like it.
The only question is – you
introduced preconditions (thank you), but no post conditions. Are you assuming
that RWE are postconditions or there are post conditions not covered by RWE?
I would also suggest a slight
change of definitions
Action Model characterizes the
“permissible set of actions and preconditions (process
model) that may be invoked against a service.” We extend
that notion here to include events as part of the event
model and that messages denote either actions or notification of events.
And finally, action definition
does not match description earlier in the document
From: Peter F Brown
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Sent: Tuesday, March 15, 2011 11:27 PM
To: soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [soa-rm-ra] Action Model One pager.... revised
Hi:
As requested, here is an update of the
(slightly more than) one-pager covering the issues of action. This takes into
account the main points raised over the last week and – if acceptable
– will be used as the basis to reword the relevant parts of section 3
Talk tomorrow,
Peter
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