suggested revisions and comments to management section

[Ken Laskey <klaskey@mitre.org>]

Michael,

 

Attached is a full review of the management section.  This is a continuation of the drops I’ve been sending you over the past week.  I chose the 3-22 version and cut in the changes you made to section 5.3.3.2.  I froze my review there so I could reach the end without having to go back and review the possibly modified ground while delaying ever getting to the end.  Thus, I haven’t looked at comments from Rex, Jeff, Boris, and possibly others.  I did, however, try to do a careful proofing job to catch the glitches Rex mentioned during the last call.

 

Ken

 

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Dr. Kenneth Laskey

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