[UPDATED LINE #'s] FW: Feedback/review comments against Sect 4(against GOLD STANDARD - 2011-04-30)

["Estefan, Jeff A (3100)" <jeffrey.a.estefan@jpl.nasa.gov>]

Ken and Peter,

 

Below are my updates corresponding to the line numbers as specified in the PDF version against Section 4.

 

Cheers…

 

- Jeff

 

Feedback on Sect 4 against GOLD STANDARD - 2011-04-30:

 

All Lines:  Need to check and update font style and size of figure cross-references used throughout the Section (actually throughout the entire spec).  Some are shown in italic 9 pt Arial font while others are shown in roman 11pt Arial font, which is the baseline font for the body of the spec.

 

Line 1292:  Remove extra space after semi-colon and before “for example” (Note: does not seem to show up in PDF version)

 

Line 1463:  Remove extra space after semi-colon and before “the relationships” (Note: does not seem to show up in PDF version)

 

Line 1465:  Remove extra space after semi-colon and before “in”

 

Line 1468:  Remove extra space after semi-colon and before “some”

 

Lines 1477:  Update erroneous cross-reference

 

Line 1505:  Capitalize “action” at the beginning of the sentence and there appears to be an erroneous hyperlink to this word in the gold source (hover mouse over word action to see what I mean).

 

Lines 1679 to 1680:  There should be a bold reference to DCMI and ISO 11179 (e.g., [DCMI], [ISO 11179])and both need to be added to the non-normative references of Section 1.6.

 

Line 1782 to 1783:  Update erroneous cross-reference

 

Line 2031:  Update erroneous cross-reference

 

Line 2097:  Actually with regards to font of the footnote #13.  Font should be footnote font (i.e., smaller size) consistent with other footnotes in the spec.

 

Line 2206 to 2207:  Update erroneous cross-reference