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Subject: RE: [soa-rm-ra] SOA-RAF punch list - as of 20120801 PM
The punch list consists of 12 items: the 9 I identified below, one each for finishing security and conformance, and the following that was mentioned at a recent call but missed in the minutes: 12. Add something to the introduction that draws attention to the RAF having engaged and strived for consistency with the activities noted in Appendix D. I remember having more eloquent words before but I don’t remember them now. This may be on the recording for two weeks ago. I may give it a shot. Ken From: Peter F Brown [mailto:peter@peterfbrown.com] Comments inline From: soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org] On Behalf Of Ken Laskey Following are the items I found. 1. Section 1.5 says “first mention ... use a bold font”. At end it says, “Where a more colloquial or informal meaning is intended, these words are used without special emphasis.” After first use, how do we know when we mean the term in its formal sense? [Peter:] I think this is now moot, as we avoid mixing informal and formal uses of terms – but worth a check 2. Are all references included in section 1.6? Are any references in section 1.6 no longer used? 3. Figure 4: missing relationship between Delegate and Actor.[Peter:] OK 4. Line 973: remove highlight[Peter:] Disagree: the highlight is using in indicating what section of text has been changed, in absence of formal “tracked change”. There are multiple instances of this issue and they will all be removed (along with all tracked changes) from the clean, authoritative, version as required by TC Admin 5. Line 1858: remove highlight[Peter:] idem 6. Figure 33 label mixed in with following text.[Peter:] Appears in the pdf CLEAN copy I see, but not the tracked version: this can happen if the word document is opened with tracked changes on and user accepts to “update all fields” when document is opened.[Peter:] Ill keep an eye on this for final submission 7. Add Kevin Smith to Acknowledgements[Peter:] OK 8. Was there decision to drop CFA completely or just move it to Appendix where it is?[Peter:] Yes, we agreed to drop completely 9. Revise RM-ODP text. Give Zoran heads up for rationale.[Peter:] Agreed Anything else?[Peter:] Kevin’s updated security text; Agree whether we need a new conformance text along lines of Rex’s suggested template or whether the edits I did in [Peter:] section 6, page 116, are sufficient at this stage (we don’t need conformance for a specification, only for a Candidate Standard) Ken --------------------------------------------------------------------------- Dr. Kenneth Laskey MITRE Corporation, M/S H305 phone: 703-983-7934 7515 Colshire Drive fax: 703-983-1379 McLean VA 22102-7508 |
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