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Subject: Re: [soa-rm-ra] SOA RAF Security Section edits

All - thank you for your comments.. I just did another significant round of edits.

I'm headed to the beach on a family vacation for the week - looking forward to talking & getting feedback when I get back!


On Tue, Jul 31, 2012 at 6:21 PM, Ken Laskey <klaskey@mitre.org> wrote:



Attached is a markup of the security section.  I made edits to substitute terms defined and used (hopefully) consistently in the rest of the document, and made some pure wordsmithing suggestions where I found the text awkward.  I had more significant issues with the Identity Propagation section.  I captured these in the comment to the section heading and then suggested some wording changes in the remainder of the section.


Happy processing.





Dr. Kenneth Laskey

MITRE Corporation, M/S H305              phone: 703-983-7934

7515 Colshire Drive                                    fax:        703-983-1379

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From: soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org] On Behalf Of Kevin Smith
Sent: Monday, July 30, 2012 4:13 PM
To: soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [soa-rm-ra] SOA RAF Security Section edits



Attached are my edits to the security section, taking a careful look at Michael's comments on the security section and based on our discussion at the last meeting.

Michael - take a look at this and let me know if this looks better..



Attachment: Security Model-KevinSmith-August4th.docx
Description: application/vnd.openxmlformats-officedocument.wordprocessingml.document

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