Re: [soa-rm-ra] SOA RAF Security Section edits

On Tue, Jul 31, 2012 at 6:21 PM, Ken Laskey <klaskey@mitre.org> wrote:

Kevin,

Attached is a markup of the security section. I made edits to substitute terms defined and used (hopefully) consistently in the rest of the document, and made some pure wordsmithing suggestions where I found the text awkward. I had more significant issues with the Identity Propagation section. I captured these in the comment to the section 5.2.5.1 heading and then suggested some wording changes in the remainder of the section.

Happy processing.

Ken

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From: soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org] On Behalf Of Kevin Smith
Sent: Monday, July 30, 2012 4:13 PM
To: soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [soa-rm-ra] SOA RAF Security Section edits

All,

Attached are my edits to the security section, taking a careful look at Michael's comments on the security section and based on our discussion at the last meeting.

Michael - take a look at this and let me know if this looks better..

Thanks,

Kevin

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