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Subject: RE: [soa-rm-ra] REMINDER: call tomorrow 17 October 2012, 1130 AM ET


Ken, all,

Only one comment was received during this 60-day review and that was from me:

Issue 312:            We tend to avoid the term “user” in the document and are usually careful to employ either “actor”, “participant” or “customer”, depending on the context. These distinctions are becoming increasingly understood and accepted. However, we don’t always avoid the term “user” and where it is still used (20 or so occasions) it probably should be another term. I think this falls well within the editorial clarifications allowed under the non-material changes rule

Attached is the proposed disposition, tracked in the issues list and marked as a series of tracked changes in the attached edited .docx file (do a Ctrl-F search for the word “user” to find all occurrences).

 

If these changes are accepted, I think we are good to go.

 

Regards,

Peter

 

From: soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org] On Behalf Of Ken Laskey
Sent: Tuesday, 16 October, 2012 12:39
To: soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [soa-rm-ra] REMINDER: call tomorrow 17 October 2012, 1130 AM ET

 

Agenda

1.       Review results of 60-day review

2.       External interactions

3.       Plans for moving forward

 

Ken

 

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Dr. Kenneth Laskey

MITRE Corporation, M/S H305              phone: 703-983-7934

7515 Colshire Drive                                    fax:        703-983-1379

McLean VA 22102-7508

 

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