RE: [soa-rm-ra] REMINDER: call tomorrow 17 October 2012, 1130 AM ET

I have two additional sets of comments that I propose we accept:

1. Rich Hilliard (IEEE RA work) is providing some updates in referencing ANSI/IEEE 1471-2000 (and its ISO/IEC counterpart)

2. Danny Thornton provided comments against changes in a section he originally authored.

The .xlsx and .png attachments to this email are from Danny. The Word attachment is a save of Rich’s comments.

We can discuss whether for tracking purposes we would want to transcribe everything into a single spreadsheet.

Ken

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From: Peter F Brown [mailto:peter@peterfbrown.com]
Sent: Tuesday, October 16, 2012 7:21 PM
To: Ken Laskey; soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: RE: [soa-rm-ra] REMINDER: call tomorrow 17 October 2012, 1130 AM ET

Ken, all,

Only one comment was received during this 60-day review and that was from me:

Issue 312: We tend to avoid the term “user” in the document and are usually careful to employ either “actor”, “participant” or “customer”, depending on the context. These distinctions are becoming increasingly understood and accepted. However, we don’t always avoid the term “user” and where it is still used (20 or so occasions) it probably should be another term. I think this falls well within the editorial clarifications allowed under the non-material changes rule

Attached is the proposed disposition, tracked in the issues list and marked as a series of tracked changes in the attached edited .docx file (do a Ctrl-F search for the word “user” to find all occurrences).

If these changes are accepted, I think we are good to go.

Regards,

Peter

From: soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org] On Behalf Of Ken Laskey
Sent: Tuesday, 16 October, 2012 12:39
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Subject: [soa-rm-ra] REMINDER: call tomorrow 17 October 2012, 1130 AM ET

Agenda

1. Review results of 60-day review

2. External interactions

3. Plans for moving forward

Ken

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MITRE Corporation, M/S H305 phone: 703-983-7934

7515 Colshire Drive fax: 703-983-1379

McLean VA 22102-7508

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