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Subject: RE: [soa-rm-ra] REMINDER: call tomorrow 17 October 2012, 1130 AM ET


Ken,

On a quick perusal, many of these issues are already addressed between the WD08 that Danny references and the public review draft.

Of those that remain, they are largely grammatical – which we can now incorporate without requiring a new public review.

On Rich’s comments, they are mainly about cross-referencing and shouldn’t pose any major problems.

I guess that the two .png files are for information only. We can’t add them without provoking a new review cycle (I don’t think Danny is suggesting this in any case, rather just pointing to related work…)

 

Cheers,

Peter

 

From: Ken Laskey [mailto:klaskey@mitre.org]
Sent: Tuesday, 16 October, 2012 16:54
To: Peter F Brown; soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org
Cc: Danny Thornton; 'Estefan, Jeff A (3180)'; ellis@deccs.com
Subject: RE: [soa-rm-ra] REMINDER: call tomorrow 17 October 2012, 1130 AM ET

 

I have two additional sets of comments that I propose we accept:

1.       Rich Hilliard (IEEE RA work) is providing some updates in referencing ANSI/IEEE 1471-2000 (and its ISO/IEC counterpart)

2.       Danny Thornton provided comments against changes in a section he originally authored.

 

The .xlsx and .png attachments to this email are from Danny.  The Word attachment is a save of Rich’s comments.

 

We can discuss whether for tracking purposes we would want to transcribe everything into a single spreadsheet.

 

Ken

 

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Dr. Kenneth Laskey

MITRE Corporation, M/S H305              phone: 703-983-7934

7515 Colshire Drive                                    fax:        703-983-1379

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From: Peter F Brown [mailto:peter@peterfbrown.com]
Sent: Tuesday, October 16, 2012 7:21 PM
To: Ken Laskey; soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: RE: [soa-rm-ra] REMINDER: call tomorrow 17 October 2012, 1130 AM ET

 

Ken, all,

Only one comment was received during this 60-day review and that was from me:

Issue 312:            We tend to avoid the term “user” in the document and are usually careful to employ either “actor”, “participant” or “customer”, depending on the context. These distinctions are becoming increasingly understood and accepted. However, we don’t always avoid the term “user” and where it is still used (20 or so occasions) it probably should be another term. I think this falls well within the editorial clarifications allowed under the non-material changes rule

Attached is the proposed disposition, tracked in the issues list and marked as a series of tracked changes in the attached edited .docx file (do a Ctrl-F search for the word “user” to find all occurrences).

 

If these changes are accepted, I think we are good to go.

 

Regards,

Peter

 

From: soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org [mailto:soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org] On Behalf Of Ken Laskey
Sent: Tuesday, 16 October, 2012 12:39
To: soa-rm-ra@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [soa-rm-ra] REMINDER: call tomorrow 17 October 2012, 1130 AM ET

 

Agenda

1.       Review results of 60-day review

2.       External interactions

3.       Plans for moving forward

 

Ken

 

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Dr. Kenneth Laskey

MITRE Corporation, M/S H305              phone: 703-983-7934

7515 Colshire Drive                                    fax:        703-983-1379

McLean VA 22102-7508

 



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