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Subject: Re: [soa-rm] [issue:structure] draft 07, sect 2, line 201, Figure 2-1


Issue has been logged, and will require TC discussion.  ID is 07-1.

-matt

Gregory A. Kohring wrote:

><current>
>Figure 2-1 SOA Architectural Model
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><suggested>
>Remove the figure.
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><notes>
>Sorry, but this figure is rather vacuous. All we see are a bunch of
>rectangles stacked together with no obvious relationship between them.
>Some of the rectangles have an "is-a" relationship to their neighbor,
>while others have a "describes" relationship and some I cannot even
>decipher what the relationship should be.
>
>I understand that people feel UML is too technical for this document,
>however, diagrams like this detract from the document's readibility.
>Try using a concept map if you really want to place a diagram at this
>point.
></notes>
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