Re: New Issue: "scopes itself" should be "focuses itself"

[Don Flinn <flinn@alum.mit.edu>]

Thanks Steve for following the format in both your mail header and the
message body.

Don

On Wed, 2005-10-05 at 17:06 +0100, Jones, Steve G wrote:
> (others to follow but thought I’d get this one out)
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> - Submitter - Steve Jones 
> - Section N° 0 - Line 28
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> - Short descriptive title "scopes itself" should be "focuses itself" 
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> - Issue Type Editorial
> - Suggestion The word "scopes" should be replaced with "focuses"
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> - Motivation (brief explanation of submitter's rationale)  - If the
> word scopes is changed to focus then the SOA-RM is applicable to all
> areas where SOA is considered while recognising that the SOA-RM has
> focused on Software so some caveats may be required.  As a specific
> example Business Blueprints in the SOA Blueprints group could then
> formally use the SOA-RM as its basis for service and interaction
> definition.
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> N.B. this would not effect the project charter or goals.
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