RE: [soa-rm] Groups - Editor's draft of PR2 (soa-rm pr2 changes.pdf) uploaded

["Duane Nickull" <dnickull@adobe.com>]

Frank:

Looks great!  Minor fixes:

Line 105-107 and 112-119 seem to have duplicate sentences.

Line 210 - "W" is capitalized in web services - not sure why since "S"
is not. This is consistent with other uses of the term.

Document Date should be May 23?

As soon as you reply I'll get the ballot set up.

Duane


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-----Original Message-----
From: frank.mccabe@us.fujitsu.com [mailto:frank.mccabe@us.fujitsu.com] 
Sent: Tuesday, May 23, 2006 5:10 PM
To: soa-rm@lists.oasis-open.org
Subject: [soa-rm] Groups - Editor's draft of PR2 (soa-rm pr2
changes.pdf) uploaded

Second revision of the editor's draft of PR2

 -- Dr. Francis McCabe

The document revision named Editor's draft of PR2 (soa-rm pr2
changes.pdf)
has been submitted by Dr. Francis McCabe to the OASIS SOA Reference
Model
TC document repository.  This document is revision #1 of soa-rm pr2
changes.pdf.

Document Description:
This is an editor's draft of the second Public Review of the RM v. 1
This has markup to highlight the differences between this version and
PR1.

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