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Subject: Re: [soa-rm] Groups - Editor's draft of PR2 (soa-rm pr2 changes.pdf) - A Couple of Grammer Corrections
On May 23, 2006, at 9:01 PM, Danny Thornton wrote: > Line 185 > Add a comma after create > ... expertise to create maintain, and > > should be > > ... expertise to create, maintain, and Was already there! > > Line 253 > An object exposes structure but no way to ... > > should be > > An object exposes structure but has no way to ... > Changed to .... there is no way to express .... Frank > > --- Duane Nickull <dnickull@adobe.com> wrote: > >> Frank: >> >> Looks great! Minor fixes: >> >> Line 105-107 and 112-119 seem to have duplicate >> sentences. >> >> Line 210 - "W" is capitalized in web services - not >> sure why since "S" >> is not. This is consistent with other uses of the >> term. >> >> Document Date should be May 23? >> >> As soon as you reply I'll get the ballot set up. >> >> Duane >> >> >> ******************************* >> Adobe Systems, Inc. - http://www.adobe.com >> Adobe Developer Program - >> http://developer.adobe.com/ >> Chair - OASIS SOA Reference Model Technical >> Committee >> Personal Blog - http://technoracle.blogspot.com/ >> ******************************* >> >> >> -----Original Message----- >> From: frank.mccabe@us.fujitsu.com >> [mailto:frank.mccabe@us.fujitsu.com] >> Sent: Tuesday, May 23, 2006 5:10 PM >> To: soa-rm@lists.oasis-open.org >> Subject: [soa-rm] Groups - Editor's draft of PR2 >> (soa-rm pr2 >> changes.pdf) uploaded >> >> Second revision of the editor's draft of PR2 >> >> -- Dr. Francis McCabe >> >> The document revision named Editor's draft of PR2 >> (soa-rm pr2 >> changes.pdf) >> has been submitted by Dr. Francis McCabe to the >> OASIS SOA Reference >> Model >> TC document repository. This document is revision >> #1 of soa-rm pr2 >> changes.pdf. >> >> Document Description: >> This is an editor's draft of the second Public >> Review of the RM v. 1 >> This has markup to highlight the differences between >> this version and >> PR1. >> >> View Document Details: >> > http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/soa-rm/document.php? > documen >> t_id=18346 >> >> Download Document: >> > http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/soa-rm/download.php/ > 18346/s >> oa-rm%20pr2%20changes.pdf >> >> Revision: >> This document is revision #1 of soa-rm pr2 >> changes.pdf. The document >> details page referenced above will show the complete >> revision history. >> >> >> PLEASE NOTE: If the above links do not work for >> you, your email >> application >> may be breaking the link into two pieces. You may >> be able to copy and >> paste >> the entire link address into the address field of >> your web browser. >> >> -OASIS Open Administration >> > > > __________________________________________________ > Do You Yahoo!? > Tired of spam? Yahoo! Mail has the best spam protection around > http://mail.yahoo.com
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